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- PanzerFaust
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The bio could use some help 
Most people dont care about the "history" as much they do the concept or what the band is all about.
The first line should grab you. Something like: "Guitars so crushing and drums so thunderous as to cause epileptic shock" or "Harmonies from the angels and songs so sweet and catchy youll be carried away to the heavens while attending a band X show".
Hug a Hardcore Kid? I guess its a hardcore band? A tour? Everybody "tours" these days. With whom did you tour? Metallica or the garage band tour across your home state with 3 other myspace garage bands playing in living rooms? I mean that does constitute a tour these days
I know there is a link to your homepage, but I was so bored with the bio I lost interest and didnt click it. Im not picking, just offering some unsolicited, but helpful advice.
Is that what you were asking Panzer?

Most people dont care about the "history" as much they do the concept or what the band is all about.
The first line should grab you. Something like: "Guitars so crushing and drums so thunderous as to cause epileptic shock" or "Harmonies from the angels and songs so sweet and catchy youll be carried away to the heavens while attending a band X show".
Hug a Hardcore Kid? I guess its a hardcore band? A tour? Everybody "tours" these days. With whom did you tour? Metallica or the garage band tour across your home state with 3 other myspace garage bands playing in living rooms? I mean that does constitute a tour these days

Is that what you were asking Panzer?
Steve is the name, drummin is my game.
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I'm currently on my "Don't Listen Too Closely Or You'll Figure Out That I Suck At This" Tour. So far it's lasted 25 years, and has been attended by literally tens of people. Ozzy cancelled Ozzfest this year because he couldn't compete. He called me, and said "Please, Johnny, give someone else a chance." Or he might have thought he was calling for pizza, you never know with Ozzy.
--->JMS

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Man! What are the odds?!?! We were both on the same tour and didnt run into each other!songsmith wrote:I'm currently on my "Don't Listen Too Closely Or You'll Figure Out That I Suck At This" Tour. So far it's lasted 25 years, and has been attended by literally tens of people. Ozzy cancelled Ozzfest this year because he couldn't compete. He called me, and said "Please, Johnny, give someone else a chance." Or he might have thought he was calling for pizza, you never know with Ozzy.--->JMS
Steve is the name, drummin is my game.
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4 the pocket also says "Ya know, a respectable place where musicians, fans, club owners, music insiders and the like can debate and share without being belittled, disrespected and taken seriously. "4_the_pocket wrote:The bio could use some help
Most people dont care about the "history" as much they do the concept or what the band is all about.
The first line should grab you. Something like: "Guitars so crushing and drums so thunderous as to cause epileptic shock" or "Harmonies from the angels and songs so sweet and catchy youll be carried away to the heavens while attending a band X show".
Hug a Hardcore Kid? I guess its a hardcore band? A tour? Everybody "tours" these days. With whom did you tour? Metallica or the garage band tour across your home state with 3 other myspace garage bands playing in living rooms? I mean that does constitute a tour these daysI know there is a link to your homepage, but I was so bored with the bio I lost interest and didnt click it. Im not picking, just offering some unsolicited, but helpful advice.
Is that what you were asking Panzer?
"Death has come to your little town."
- 4_the_pocket
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Thanks for paying attention witchhunt! And thank you for the positive reinforcementwitchhunt wrote:4 the pocket also says "Ya know, a respectable place where musicians, fans, club owners, music insiders and the like can debate and share without being belittled, disrespected and taken seriously. "4_the_pocket wrote:The bio could use some help
Most people dont care about the "history" as much they do the concept or what the band is all about.
The first line should grab you. Something like: "Guitars so crushing and drums so thunderous as to cause epileptic shock" or "Harmonies from the angels and songs so sweet and catchy youll be carried away to the heavens while attending a band X show".
Hug a Hardcore Kid? I guess its a hardcore band? A tour? Everybody "tours" these days. With whom did you tour? Metallica or the garage band tour across your home state with 3 other myspace garage bands playing in living rooms? I mean that does constitute a tour these daysI know there is a link to your homepage, but I was so bored with the bio I lost interest and didnt click it. Im not picking, just offering some unsolicited, but helpful advice.
Is that what you were asking Panzer?

In fact, I got a PM from a Rockpage band asking me if I would help them out and review their website as a result of my post! How cool is that! Of course, I was happy to help.
I do feel a little silly that the OP was just trying to pad the bands hit count


Please, witchhunt, continue to pay attention and spread those wonderful rays of sunshine you possess. Youll love this, my man!
Steve is the name, drummin is my game.
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4_the_pocket wrote:Thanks for paying attention witchhunt! And thank you for the positive reinforcementwitchhunt wrote:4 the pocket also says "Ya know, a respectable place where musicians, fans, club owners, music insiders and the like can debate and share without being belittled, disrespected and taken seriously. "4_the_pocket wrote:The bio could use some help
Most people dont care about the "history" as much they do the concept or what the band is all about.
The first line should grab you. Something like: "Guitars so crushing and drums so thunderous as to cause epileptic shock" or "Harmonies from the angels and songs so sweet and catchy youll be carried away to the heavens while attending a band X show".
Hug a Hardcore Kid? I guess its a hardcore band? A tour? Everybody "tours" these days. With whom did you tour? Metallica or the garage band tour across your home state with 3 other myspace garage bands playing in living rooms? I mean that does constitute a tour these daysI know there is a link to your homepage, but I was so bored with the bio I lost interest and didnt click it. Im not picking, just offering some unsolicited, but helpful advice.
Is that what you were asking Panzer?![]()
In fact, I got a PM from a Rockpage band asking me if I would help them out and review their website as a result of my post! How cool is that! Of course, I was happy to help.
I do feel a little silly that the OP was just trying to pad the bands hit countSneaky, sneaky, but effective
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Please, witchhunt, continue to pay attention and spread those wonderful rays of sunshine you possess. Youll love this, my man!



"Death has come to your little town."
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I do recognize one of the guitar players in this group "SHAUN BARR". He is in like 3 or 4 hardcore death metal bands... (or was).. I believe one of them is called "Chapter 5"....
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Drain the Sorrow is actually a VERY good band which Ive been able to see several times at Aldo's the guys in the band are really nice guys too, tho I do not know the reason to why they are doing their last show, but you should check it out... They are heavy... And Jay, Dan or another Aldo's regular band, might know why...

